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Poem type thing I wrote.

post #1 of 7
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I wrote this, & I would very much like your feedback on it, if
you have time to read it,please?
Thank you

http://www.herewearetogether.co.uk/?p=173
post #2 of 7
It's lovely..thank you for sharing it.
post #3 of 7
Thread Starter 
thank you for not being mean, i am so unsure about this, i don't usually ever want anyone to read anything i write. thank you!
post #4 of 7
its wonderful! Don't be afraid to write things and to let people see them to!
post #5 of 7
I loved it. Thank you so much for sharing. I was very impressed by how kind and sympathetic you were to yourself. Bravo.
post #6 of 7
Ah, sweetheart!

Beautiful! it touched my heart, it's something some of us can do. You are very wordly as well. Good job!
post #7 of 7
I think it's beautiful... I had one of those days yesterday and I thank you for reminding me I am not alone.
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