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Just started a blog....  

post #1 of 6
Thread Starter 
and I'm nervous as heck!!

Someone please tell me what you think (and please be honest!!!)

http://justbreath.typepad.com/


post #2 of 6
had to get in a reply before your post gets deleted (and it will, rule-breaker ). there is this silly rule that says "don't blog about blogging." blog about other people's blogs, yes, but about your personal blogging process/experience? like "sorry i haven't posted in so long!" or "i don't know what to write about today" are supposedly completely bad, bad, bad. but whatever, i like your blog so far and loved your first "real" post (today's) because i've been comtemplating the same thing, not the same circumstances but a similar kind of shift in my mom-status and what it means in terms of my identity as a mom. looks good - i will definitely keep reading!

but wait, is it supposed to be 'just breath' or 'just breathe'?
post #3 of 6
Thread Starter 
Zoinks!

I didn't know I was breaking any rules by posting about my blog. Sorry

What's proper protocol?

Thanks for your feedback, doubledutch. It's very much appreciated!

Oh, and yes. It's supposed to be Just Breathe. Ugh. I can change the title, but not the URL.
post #4 of 6
check out the sticky 'critique my work'. posting a link to your blog and asking people to tell you what you think seems like a very normal, non-rule-breaking thing to do, but this thread explains the guidelines for getting feedback. basically you will pm someone to get on a list, and when it's your turn, she will post the link to your blog for people to critique. that way, there are just a couple blogs up for review at any given time. the bonus is, since you'll have to wait a little bit for that to happen, you'll have more posts then for people to get a better feel for your style.

i'm sorry about the url thing. i have something wonky with mine too, and i was also very sad to discover it is one letter too long for an etsy name. so my etsy shop can't be called the same thing as my blog. blah!
post #5 of 6
Hi Kish (not kish...).

I looked at your blog and like it. You're a very good writer and it's a pleasure to read what you have to say.

*constructive criticism alert* *woot, woot*

I think you need to get something up that says who you are in the "about" section. Also some graphics and /or photos would be nice too. Your blog doesn't have to be just text and it's nice to see things as you read a blog.

Just wanted to add: put a link in your profile to your blog. That way, people can find it.
post #6 of 6
Ah, it happens sometimes. I'll close this now and then you can sign up for a critique at a later date.
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