please check out my doula site

[lovebeingamomma]

hey if anyone wants to critique my re-done website, feel free! For example if you think there's key information I'm missing, anything that a potential client would like to see. Thanks RIdoula.com

[Paige, CPM]

Awsome, I love the design and content!

- one of your astreck sentances says til, instead of until

- I might think about being clear on number of visits...for the potential client and for the possibility of burn out...I might consider two as standard, and if you feel like you could do more based on clients needs and your circumstances than you can do that .

- perhaps add more info pages to your site like local resources, books, videos, holistic practitioners, yoga classes, postpartum depression, parenting, etc

- have a copy of your contract, informed consent pdf

- I can't remember, did you clarify if you go to peoples homes or just meet them @ the hosp...I thing that is import info and a good selling point if you do go to the home first

Good luck & maybe we will get work together someday!

[lovebeingamomma]

thank you that's great feedback! Which practice do you work at?

[Paige, CPM]

Birth Care Midwifery

[mumm]

Environment is spelt wrong.
What is might look better than What's.
doulas significantly not doula's significantly
Maybe use mother occasionally instead of mom? (A non-mom, which is what a first time mom is, doesn't always feel comfortable with mom words like mom or poop, kwim? )

I don't feel like I get a good sense of who you are and really that is what it all comes down to. I hate to say it but maybe a photo of you? How old are your kids? What was your previous career? Why did you have hospital births?

Congratulations on getting this up off the ground! Very exciting. I hope it is works out well.

[lovebeingamomma]

yes there will be a photo up as soon as I get one taken It will be of my whole family. And I will add some more personal things about myself, I'm a SAHM. Thanks for the advice!

[lovebeingamomma]

Alright I have changed it a bit. Let me know if you think I give a better picture of myself. I really appreciate all your suggestions. I'm still working on getting the photo up and getting my contract attached.

[mumm]

Not to be overly sappy but I love to see someone doing something they care about. I have another few years to figure what I want to be when I grow up since I do not want to go back to my previous career. I dream about being a student for the rest of my life, or a tennis club mom , but I don't think my finances could handle that. Best of luck!:

[DaughterOfKali]

I'm a marketing director and have written down some changes you should make.
I'd rather not list them here but if you pm me, I'll send you my ideas.

[lovebeingamomma]

yes I understand mumm. I think when people meet with me it will be obvious that I'm passionate about this, it's rather hard to convey that on a website but I'll try anyway. Let's see things I wanted to be when I was yonger...vet, writer, aerobics instructer, counselor, youth leader...yeah So finally I have found what I was meant to do!