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Seeking Feedback for Ltr. to the Editor - Flu Shots for Pregnant

post #1 of 13
Thread Starter 
The Philly Inquirer had an article about new studies showing positive outcomes for babies whose moms got a flu shot while pregnant. The article, of course, includes a fun quote from Paul Offit about how "terribly dangerous" it is for parents to not get vaccinated and not have kids vaccinated.
http://www.philly.com/inquirer/world_us/67472417.html

Anyway, I wanted to respond to some points in the article. I've never written a Letter to the Editor before. I'd appreciate feedback/critique/suggestions:


Re. the article “Studies Back flu Shots for the Pregnant”, there is no doubt that any pregnant woman would like to do all that she could to avoid having a premature birth, an underweight baby, or a baby who requires hospitalization for respiratory illnesses – not to mention preventing maternal death. The researchers who conducted these new studies should be congratulated for exploring the impact of the influenza vaccine on unborn children.

That said, it would be naïve to think that the only impact a drug could have on an unborn child would be seen in the first few years of that child's life, or only in very obvious ways, such as prematurity of birth. While Bruce Gellin is quoted as saying that the H1N1 vaccine, like the seasonal flu vaccine, is made “with every test and every safety precaution,” the manufacturers of both seasonal and H1N1 flu vaccines clearly state on the package inserts that these vaccines have not been tested for carcinogenic or mutagenic (i.e. causing birth defects) potential. In the 1940's-1970's many women were prescribed DES, or ingested DES via prenatal vitamins, because this drug was thought to prevent premature births. It was only after the daughters of these women tried having children themselves that it came to light that exposure to DES in the womb could cause infertility years later. DES has also been linked to other medical problems, including a particular form of cancer. It stands to reason, as Neil Fishman admitted in the article, that pregnant women would be wary of being injected with a vaccine for which information regarding long-term impact is missing.

Anecdotally, when I was pregnant with my son in 2007-2008, I was also swimming in germs every day as a kindergarten teacher. I chose not to receive the seasonal flu shot. I did not get the flu. My son was born on his due date and was a whopping 9 lbs. 7 oz. - a surprise to everyone given that I am not a large person.


ETA: The current word count is 339 and I need to limit it to 200. Not sure what to edit out.
post #2 of 13
No advice on the letter, but I got the flu shot when I was pg with DS and he was born at a whopping 9lbs 10oz and I'm not a large person either! I didn't get the flu while pg that time, but any other time before when I had gotten the flu shot, I did get a small dose of it. Weird, huh?
post #3 of 13
Good letter!

To make it shorter, you could either make the entire letter personal--and have the last paragraph be the only paragraph. Or, if you'd rather it be a commentary on the untested nature of the vaccine and future potential ill-effects, you could remove that last paragraph, and also take out: "While Bruce Gellin..." and start with "The manufacturers...

I'm with the Atlantic on the flu shot. I had the shot for many years and never got the flu. Did it work? Or, did it work for me because I wasn't going to get the flu anyway? I did have it when pg with DD and DS; we'll have to see in the future. Ages 7 and 4 seem ok.

I don't know how they relate birthweight to the flu shot. I know people with all different sized babies, some who had the flu shot and some who didn't. What is probably more likely is that moms with flu were low on Vitamin D; studies have shown that low Vitamin D leads to low birthweights.
post #4 of 13
Naturalnews.com had an opinion piece on this "study" on the front page of their website today. I find some of their stuff a little out there but it may give you some ideas or info to look into.
post #5 of 13
Thread Starter 
I'd definitely rather have it be about the untested nature of the vax than have it be personal. I'll do some more playing around with it. Thanks for the feedback!
post #6 of 13
Great letter. I think it's great for people to see you talking about fears other than just autism and vaccines. I think so many people think that people who don't vaccinate are just afraid of autism.

I would cut the last paragraph. I think with a little editing it could easily get under 200 words. If you have a new version that still needs cut down a little, I would love to help. I've done a little letter to the editor writing myself.
post #7 of 13
Scale back the first paragraph if what you wrote was directly from their article. The will get the idea behind it already. Completely cut out the last paragraph. Anecdotes are available for both sides and it never makes for a good argument.

Good for you writing to the editor! I emailed our local AM radio host on Wednesday about the ingredients of the H1N1 vaccine and he read it on the radio (and called me a good mom for researching vaccines!). I was so proud.
post #8 of 13
Thread Starter 

Exactly 200 Words!

Here's my edited version. I'm about to email it to the newspaper:

Re. the article “Studies back flu shots for the pregnant,” there is no doubt that any pregnant woman would do all that she could to avoid negative outcomes for her baby and herself. The researchers who conducted these new studies should be congratulated for exploring the impact of the influenza vaccine on unborn children.

That said, it would be naïve to think that the only impact a drug could have on an unborn child would be seen in the first few years of that child's life, or only in very obvious ways, such as prematurity of birth. The manufacturers of both seasonal and H1N1 flu vaccines clearly state that these vaccines have not been tested for carcinogenic or mutagenic (i.e. causing birth defects) potential. In the 1940's-1970's many women were prescribed DES, or ingested DES via prenatal vitamins, because this drug was thought to prevent premature births. It was only years later that the effects of DES exposure in utero began to reveal themselves – including infertility and a particular form of cancer. It stands to reason that pregnant women would be wary of being injected with a vaccine for which information regarding long-term impact is missing.
post #9 of 13
That sounds great!
post #10 of 13
Great job!
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post #12 of 13
I really liked this particular sentence in the original, is there a way to include it and still get the count down?

"It was only after the daughters of these women tried having children themselves that it came to light that exposure to DES in the womb could cause infertility years later."

This explains it in a way everyone can understand.


Regarding the study on flu shot in pregnancy and birth weight, I find it so appalling and ridiculous I wouldn't even know where to begin. I loved Mike Adams' story on this, it is exactly how I feel too, and it explains how they can come to such absurd conclusions

http://www.naturalnews.com/027365_fl...als_shots.html

My own baby was 10 lbs 1 oz, born 2 days after due date - I never had a flu shot in my life. I believe birth weights have NOTHING to do with flu shots during pregnancy and it has nothing to do with my own experience. Even if I had a small baby, I would still believe the same!! Have people lost all their marbles??? What a crazy world.
post #13 of 13
Thread Starter 
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Originally Posted by newmum35 View Post
I really liked this particular sentence in the original, is there a way to include it and still get the count down?

"It was only after the daughters of these women tried having children themselves that it came to light that exposure to DES in the womb could cause infertility years later."

This explains it in a way everyone can understand.
I do like how that sentence reads, too. Unfortunately, I already emailed it to the paper. I feel like it's unlikely it'll even be published, though...

It was hard to whittle it down to 200 words.
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