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11/17/09 at 11:03am
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But I feel a burst of energy comin' on...going in with the intent to kill off anything that drags the story and hinders the flow. I've got 165K so far....I need to cut a lot out and make it stronger. Hoping to condense it to maybe 100K?






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I wrote a new prologue which is a rape scene...and I know it works so well with my book...but the trouble is...my family...KWIM?
this is what the book is about. And there is no way around it. My MC was raped in the past and it has made her who she is today...and it's not in total detail, but it's a rape. This is to say it ever gets published ![]() I'm not going to stress about it. But it does poke at me every so often. That WHAT IF they freak? question... Maybe I'll just tell them to be happy for me and not read the book! LOL |
...my book has a lot of recreational drugs, casual sex and that isn't the problem..the problem is it's no big deal for these characters...not earth shattering, life altering issues...they just like a bit of pot and, well sex too.