Critique my website? - Page 2

[blessedwithboys]

i would suggest that anywhere the name of your company appears, it should be italicized or underlined or something. there are a few spots where it sort of blends into the surrounding text and doesnt stand out as The Name of Your Company.

also, magic erasers are not eco-friendly

[Fuamami]

Originally Posted by blessedwithboys

i would suggest that anywhere the name of your company appears, it should be italicized or underlined or something. there are a few spots where it sort of blends into the surrounding text and doesnt stand out as The Name of Your Company.

also, magic erasers are not eco-friendly

That's a good point about the company.

I have done quite a bit of research on Magic Erasers, and while they're not the most eco-friendly product, they do have a number of qualities that make them fairly green. I use them sparingly, but they can clean things that other products can't without the toxic chemicals.

[Fuamami]

Originally Posted by lilyka

gees, for $100 I would totally hire you to come clean after my tennants moved out....that would make my day.

Too bad you don't live in Reno! However, please note that "some conditions apply".

[lilyka]

fine, I would clear out the furniture and dead animals myself.......

[Fuamami]

Originally Posted by lilyka

fine, I would clear out the furniture and dead animals myself.......

Ha! Yes, dead animals would be considered "conditions".

[amberskyfire]

I agree that the words around the image on the first page are too close to the image. You can add horizontal space (HSpace) to the sides of the image to push the wording further away.

[lovebug]

Moving into a new apartment? Let A Natural Sparkle get rid of the last tenant's gunk before you do!

i would take out the "before you do' part because to me it sounds like i am going to have to clean the gunk too...

i JUST started to look at the site i will look more and post again