I do love how descriptive she is but the repeating of certain things is irritating. Plus there are a few mistakes she made about some major scenes in other books that make me nuts. Like when Ayla discovered fire with the fuzz getting a burn mark then in another book she says it burned her leg and the one where she dosnt know what an onager is in POP yet she killed and ate one in VOH. I mean I can understand slight oppsies but to make them with major parts of the story not so much.
But then I guess taking so long to write like she does her memory fades over time
but like you said a good editor would help with that as well since she/he could read the old books then remind her so she could fix it if she screws up in the new one.
I really hope that Brokaval dosnt do something horrible to Ayla like hurt Jondalar or one of the animals I fear that she will write in the deaths of the animals and if she does it will ruin the whole book for me. I can handle them getting hurt like Wolf did but not their deaths.