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Week 5/ November 1/Passions and Obsessions

post #1 of 54
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Dear Friends,

Thank you all for your warm wishes to me and to each other as we continue on this journey together. Next week, we are going to begin working with the idea of re-occuring themes in your work.

I would like to ask you all to post some of your writing goals. For example, you may want to write a series of letters to your child or complete a short story. Perhaps your goal is to write three days a week for fifteen minutes. Whatever it is, this is the week to put it out there! Also, next week you will begin giving feedback to each other. I am going to post an extra thread on guidelines for feedback. I cannot tell you how important it is to me that you all follow these guidelines. For this to remain a safe space, it is imperative that feedback be given in a respectful, supportive manner. Please read the guidelines and refer back to them whenever you are giving your perspective on someone's writing.

Now, let's enjoy our week together!



1. How is your list of passions and obsessions coming along?
Please jot down at least three to write about this week. Some examples from my list are raising Chloe, the pursuit of Truth,the perfect meal,traveling in Europe,the best sex,making films, serving others, fulfilling my life's purpose, floating in the ocean at Big Sur. Feel free to use any of mine if they coincide with yours! Have fun making and adding to your list. Write for fifteen minutes on each this week.

2.Write for twenty minutes beginning with the words " I love........"

3. Then, write for twenty minutes beginning with the words "I don't love......"

Choose three of the following twelve topics to write on for 5-7 minutes this week.

1. What I carry...
2. My daughter........
3. My son.....
4. My child's father......
5. My body......
6. Motherhood changed.............
7. How I was mothered....
8. First kiss.........
9. 1969 ..........
10. Hard labor...............
11. I dream......
12. Accomplishments......
13. Fatherhood...........
14. Wildness....
15. Mercy.........

Just go with the one's that speak to your first impulse. Remember to keep your pen moving across the page at all times.Surrender to wildness. Surrender to passion. On the page and in your life. Let this be a week for exploration.

***** Bonus challenge!!!!!!

Celebrate your passions this week. Take a walk in a new place (with or without your children). Ask yourself the question " how can I be living a more passionate life?" or "how can I reconcile my passions and my childrens needs in a peaceful, joyful way?" Let this walk be about meditating on one of these questions and opening to the answers and inspirations.When you come home, make a list of your revelations.
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How I was mothered

how i was mothered is complex, murky inside me. First, I feel others judgements that i know are not true. Like when I moved in with my Step-Mom and Dad across country after my Mom fled an abusive marriage and had a hard time taking care of me financially, She said, "would you be happier with your Dad?". And that was that. I knew if she brought that up, it was what should be done. I didn't protest as I later knew I should have. Later, I replayed it in my mind, and said "No, I amhappy as long as I am with you... I don't care if we're poor and I can't have new clothes."
When I moved in with Dad, we had our one and only open communication around the table, when my Step-mom coldly told me, "I just don't know how a mother can abandon her children.." This hurt me so deeply i could not respond. I felt guilty. I felt a burden. Now, I know they had no idea what we just endured together. I knew my Mom loved me with all her heart. It was the reality of money and all the things a teenager expects in this society that were hard for her, being newly single, after raising four kids, with only a GED looking for work. I felt like I needed to defend her for the rest of my life because I saw how she was hurt..... I heard it through walls.
She gave me independence, even if it broke our hearts. She has always mothered me as close inside her heart as possible, never for a moment abandoning me. She mothered me by making me strong. No wind or wave can break me because of my mother.
post #3 of 54
What I carry in my heart is the heavy weight of truth. My life is a very precarious balance. The only solidity in my life are my children, and they ground me. To look at me, you would never know of the heaviness I carry.

My children are my life. They have saved my life. And for them, I give my life. This is a truth that I believe. This I carry inside. I make my choices for them. Choices that hold me prisoner in a world of my making...for them.

I carry the truth of what the world has to offer, of the discoveries and the pain. I want this world to be magical for them, yet I have seen the truth. So I do what I can to change it, and I shield their eyes from its horrors while carrying the weight of this knowledge deep inside. They need to believe in the magic.

I carry with me the truths that would hurt them. Sometimes I have to look away so that they do not see what is inside. The truth about their father and I. They see how we both adore them but they do not see that he is unable to touch me. He can tickle them until they shriek with giggles, yet he cringes away from my slightest touch. I turn to my children to hold and hug me and fill up that void.

I carry with me the truth that those hugs keep me sane.
post #4 of 54

My Body

I look back on the days when my body was mine. Running topless along the beach, swimming naked in the sea. Not one to be self-concious, I shared my body freely. It was I, at nineteen, sitting nude in the middle of a circle of grey-haired men and women as they sketched and painted visions of their lost youth. I shared my body with those beautiful boys and girls who tumbled into bed with me on many lazy summer afternoons. My body was my glory when I had nothing else. Those were the days of my youth. I took it all for granted, living for the moment.

When I became pregnant, I was completely engrossed in the miracle. Inside of my body grew a life. By belly blossomed, stretching, growing. I was so entranced by the miracle taking place right before my eyes. The day I became pregnant, my body was no longer my own. It was a vessel, carrying something precious. I gained respect and awe for my body as, screaming in pain, I pushed this beautiful little person out of my womb. My breasts were no longer my own. They did not belong to me for my pleasure, they were for something far more important. Like the rest of my body, they were intended to give life.

Now I am amazed at this body of mine. My breasts are not recognizable as the breasts of my youth. No longer pert and perky, they hang gently, touching against my skin. My belly is soft and I have curves that mark me as a woman, not a girl. I am reminded of the woman as Maiden, Mother and Crone. I was a Maiden in the days of my youth, and am now a Mother. Time will continue and I will become an old woman. I cannot imagine how it will be, just as I could not imagine being a mother while I was still young and free.

My body has given me so much. I have been beautiful. I have born children. I have been healthy and strong. These marks that I carry tell a tale of a girl who is now something so much more. A girl who has finally become a woman.
post #5 of 54
I do not love the silence between us;
the carefully choreographed steps we take
to avoid stepping on anyone's toes.
The elaborate dance with carefully calculated distance;
that we use to avoid touching
anything deeper than fingertips and polite nods.

I do not love what we have become:
Guests decked out in our formal finery,
feathers that mask the deepening wounds of neglect.

We dance with backs straight, heads held high
fingertips barely noticing each other;
our steps are so familiar that touch is no longer nessicary. (SP?)

Others will look and say:
That couple moves so well together,
They must have been at this for a long time.

We look straight ahead, over each other's shoulders,
never focusing on the other's face.
But if we did it would be like looking into a cold mirror
or just beyond it, and finding a blank reflection.

I do not love the music we have written
to hide the silence; the archaic musette
of partners and prancing we bind ourselves in.

I dance it anyway, to cover the silence of our shared voices
to hear the swish of my silk skirt
and distract me from this painfully cinched corset.

I do not love the silence between us,
but I prefer it to our conversations
so we dance and dance,
until there is no breath to dance more.
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Wildness inside me, wildness inside us, is challenged by so much, by so many. I want to beat the drum under a big tree, I want to feel the soft decaying needles under by bare feet, I want to share this with you, my only daughter and my soul mate. I can see my neighbors peeping over the fence, between the boards at us. I can sense the discomfort of the neighborhood in you, my barefoot daughter who bangs on the drum when she is frustrated and angry, when the wild passion overflows and invades all sensibilities. When we are on the trail you want to climb the trees and rocks and dangle from the cliffsides, and I curb your wildness, reign you in. I know that I could lose you, and I panic and hold back your passion; I feel sad for that. We are wild women, meant to run free and be a tribe apart. We are wild, and the wildness calls us, finally, to the spirits where we live in eternity.
post #7 of 54

writing goals

Ok, I'm going to be honest here. I have a really hard time finishing my writing. I have not YET finished a whole week's assignment, I have a hundred unfinished ideas, stories, poems, stuffed into drawers and binders and notebooks. I have a story right now that I love, I love the characters and the line of the plot, but I can't seem to get to finishing it. I have 3 chapters. There are probably 15 or so more. I just can't get there. I was hoping that this writing would lend me some discipline, and I might be motivated enough to actually finish this one piece before the baby is born (Jan. 05). I'm not doing well yet with it all, but I'm not giving up, either. Thanks.
post #8 of 54

Writing goals

I'm also having a hard time finishing everything. And there's a lot of homework this week!

However, I do like the goal (and think it's doable) of 3X a week for 15 minutes. I think I can do that. Yes, I CAN!
post #9 of 54

Passion/Obsession #1: Raising my son well

Raising my son well has been my focus since before I took that giant new step into motherhood. I had always thought, “If I choose to have a child, I’ll give it my all.” My goal would then be to be a good mother (raise my son in respect, kindness and truth) whom my child will love, respect, be proud of and cherish. That’s my goal now because God gave me a son.

I eat parenting books for breakfast, lunch and dinner and I chant the positive discipline mantra over and over in hopes whatever is there will automatically kick in once it’s needed and I’m irrational and exhausted. I learn by observing. I start to identify “mistakes” in other parents’ handling of a situation. I would have done it differently, I say to myself, safe in the caverns of my thoughts. Or would I?

I certainly hope so. I try to live out the ideal I have in my head, but at the same time, I know I have to resign myself to the fact that I am a human being and will make mistakes. Mistakes are wonderful opportunities to learn, says my favorite discipline book. Wait, let me repeat that fifty times and I’ll be back. Oh, but everything is worth it for him. For my dear, dear son.

I treasure every moment with him. Because as the ocean waves lick the beach and forever and constantly change its landscape so my son will grow and change into a man and move away from me someday. It pains me to even write about it, but then again, that’s the ultimate expression of love – letting go.
post #10 of 54

Passion/Obsession #2: Cooking, preparing and eating nutritious and delicious food

Fruits and Vegetables


Crunchy, munchy
Delicate, Sweet
Bitter, Surprising

Whole Grains

Nourish your body, heart and mind

Saturated Fats
Hydrogenated Oils
Trans Fats


End up on my behind

Meats, legumes and dairy
Taking it easy
Yum and more versatile yum

Whole foods

Makes me feel all warm and cozy inside!
post #11 of 54

writing goals

My goal, simply, is just to write. I used the diminutive "just." It's ironic because nothing is just ___________ anymore with two children. i'm never "just" having coffee. i am having coffee and changing a diaper, preparing a meal, consoling, cringing, or crying...so my goal is to write something once a week, and be happy that i managed to do that, and not to be too hard on myself for not doing more. i didn't manage to post anything last week. i did, however, work on some other writing projects. because i didn't post, it was tempting not to come back here---the perfectionist in me won't win, the creative lover of life mother will and i will be happy with at least writing "something" once a week because that's a lot more than I've done in a long long time.
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what i love...

I love myself not only for what i am but what i am when i am with me. i'm schizophrenic and so am i this is stream of consciousness or rather stream of avoidance. i chose to write about what I LOVE. i love my family, my sons, i love the way my eldest wants to be with me and can express that so openly. i love the telepathy that we share--how in sync i can be with them--that comes in sharp contrast to the dischord I feel from too much coffee and anger too early in the morning. I love unconditionally: mother,husband, sons, grandmother, friends, myself. I love the sweet release that comes from inner stillness: the yoga of the mind and body. i love being nurtured and nurturing, cooking good meals, eating good meals, massaging and being massaged. i love relaxing, emptying my mind, giving and receiving, finding my groove, dancing wildly and freely, feeling the music with every atom of my body, i love simple, the colors of the leaves that smudge the sky, rain falling, sun shining, feeling, hearing self expression, seeing self expression--ART, transformation, i love the journey,i love sensation, being seeing appreciation, grattitude: watching my 10 month sway and waddle across the room, smiling dancing PURE LOVE..watching my 3 year old jump flip clap. I love GOD...i have to give thanks and praises for what i love. i love the life i live that i have been given. i love creation: birth, song, spirit...from the microcosm of the brilliant color of the moss in my front yard, to the macrocosm of the heavens...i love you
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What I don't love

I don't love being tired and cranky when my babies need me. I don't love giving everything to them and having nothing left for myself. I don't love wanting to do something else desperately when my baby desperately wants me to pick him up. i don't love been selfish. i don't love being selfless. i don't love my ego. i am trying to let it go. i don't love the struggle, but i know the struggle makes the victory sweeter. I don't love the ALMIGHTY DOLLAR, complacency, ignorance, or avoidance, inertia, hate, i don't love arguing, frustration, lacker of power, or self-control, i don't love my reaction to whining and crying. i sometimes have to grit my teeth, grin and bear it. i don't love attitudes and beliefs that do not acknowledge the true state of our world. i do not love seeing our environment, our selves and our rights mutiliated, ripped apart, and abused, molested, and starved. i don't love the political system that propagates this state of being--that is driven by petrolatum and money, insurance companies that don't allow a woman to birth the way she wants to if it's not "in-network" i don't love screaming, so i must whisper--i don't love not being understood or heard, or felt--i do not love the sickness of our world, our society, the cycle of abuse that creates serial killers and pedophiles. i do not love the negative, so i will stop now before it completely overtakes me...
post #14 of 54
My goals

to start writing again. I used to write alot, and then I don't know I just stopped and I was lucky if I wrote once every three months or so. The more i write the better my writing gets. Plus the more I write the more likely at least one of them has to be good. Plus it's just enjoyable and I had been missing things for ME to do.

When I Carry..

When I carry the weight of the world on my shoulders....

I walk down the block well a cool wind blows, my hip jutting out to one side to support my daughter. My arm being pulled by the leash, by my dog. My husband by my side with the other dog. We are walking to the polls. WE are going to cast our vote. We are in the minority becasue we vote. Most people don't vote especially if it isn't a presidential election. We are in the minority because the people whom we cast our votes for rarely win.
Yet everytime the polls open we take that walk, we cast our vote on the invisable ballot of Florida's touchscreen voting system. A system I don't really trust. A system of no accountability, no paper trail.
We take that walk and say hello to the volunteers at the polls. All who ask about our daughter. Everytime I tell the story of my first contraction. How I felt my uterus squeeze in preparation as I cast my vote.
I tell my daughter how voting isn't only a right but an obligation. I think of the Preacher who told the congregation "If you don't vote you have no right to complain". I remember being in the voting booth with my mother as a child, and how proud I was when she let me punch a candidate. I wish for those old punch card machine's they seemed so much more patriotic.
When I vote I carry the weight of the world, of an ideal on my shoulders. I carry it proudly and happily as I take that walk, as I cast my vote.

I'm feeling pretty politacal with the elections going on, so I chose that as one off my list

I voted for Kucinich in the primaries. I knew he wouldn't win, but I desperatly wanted him to. He would be exactly what this country needs. I was not dissappointed at his loss, or I should say, my body didn't revolt at his loss. There was still Anbody But Bush. There was Kerry, well not the ideal candidate he was not a bad candidate either.
I went out and helped people to get rigistered and I discussed politics with my friends and especially my husband. A man, who I had first met when they were tallying up all of the votes for the 2000 election. A man whom I let him know was crazy for having voted for Bush in that election. Not that it mattered in the end with Jeb helping him to steal Florida. Everyone I knew was voting for Kerry, there was this gentle craze in the air as young people joined together in the fight against Bush. People who had never voted before were convinced that this year it mattered. People who had voted became impassioned. This country was heading in the wrong direction and we were all going to do something about it.
On November 2 the lines were long, we stood and the talk was overwalmingly (spellin??) for Kerry.Everyone stood in those lines, and waited patiently and happily, and proudly as democracy was put into action. I was smiling so much that all these people came out, I was so happy I almost cried. I cast my vote and showed up late to work because of it.
I had the television on as they made predictions and tallied up exit polls. AS state after state came in. AS the stories of long lines and people still waiting to vote hours after poll closings came in. I was optimistic, more then that in the beginning; I was certain of a new start. As thenight wore on and the map started to look like a red tide of blood I got nervous and my belly started to flip-flop. I stayed up chatting on the computer with other worried and dis-believing mothers as the country Cheered for Bush. When I laymy head on my pillow it was in despair, and with little hope that Kerry would pull through the victor. When I faced the day I stayed away from the media I couldn't know, not yet. Then at work all these happy republicans annouced elatedly that Kerry had conceded. I put my head in my hands and held back the tears. I amm devasted.
I am angry that more young people didn't get out and vote. I am scared for my country and our safety. I am saddened for the troops that will continue to fight and die on false pretenses.
My stomache dropped in march 2003 as i looked at my newly born daughter and heard Bush announce we were going to war with Iraq. I cired for what this meant about the world in which she would live. Now I can only sit sullen eyed and heavy hearted as I ponder four more years of Bush.

Ok and i know this is long but i want to do one that isn't political


running wild
hair streaming
sun kissed skin
scraped knees
bare feet

hanging from rafters
riding pigs
climbing hills
exploring woods
living in trees
laughing wildly loudly

post #15 of 54
My writing goals

I would like to write articles for submitting to magazines.
I would like to possibly write short stories and one day maybe even a book. I write daily in a journal and have journals for my kids that I would like to keep up with at least every month.

Hard Labor

Hard labor has set in. I have not felt intensity like this before. I feel like every contraction brings a freight train that is running through my body.

It's coming. I brace against the kitchen counter. I make noise, a lot of noise. The pain is so intense. I am screaming. Nothing eases it. Nothing touches it. I brace. It washes over me. It pours through me. It is all consuming.

My arms, bracing against the counter are shaking from the pressure and yet all I feel is the pain in my cervix.

And then it eases. I know the break will be short but I celebrate the moment of calm, the chance to rest. I know it will be over soon. I know I am near the end. I know I can do it. And then...................it comes again!
post #16 of 54
My writing goals -
I want to leave an imprint of me for my daughter - I would have loved such a thing from my mother and father. I have written since I could write; poetry, little stories, weird sayings. I have also written 30,000 words of my non-fiction book. I haven't written another word since April for it - I lost heart. I have had poems and other little things published, but I don't care to make money from writing. I write because I have to - if that is a goal, then that is my goal.
post #17 of 54
My writing goals are,well, just to write. I use to write a poem every morning before I went to work, just exercises sometimes but something. Now that I'm a SAHM I'm lucky if I manage to write the grocery list! I'm looking forward to feedback and trying to form the habit of writing again. I do manage to write a letter to my dd at least once a month (have since she was born) so she'll know what this time before her memory is like. I'd like to get better at using my language to convey my thoughts and emotions so others can understand them instead of it just being a catharsis for me and for that I need structure and feedback...............I could use alot of help with grammar too LOL
post #18 of 54

My Writing Goals

I have been so bad about writing. It isn't that I don't want to...I just haven't found time for myself. I know, I need to make time for myself. I'm never going to find it. So there we have it...I am going to make time for myself.

I want to start journaling again. I think I scared myself with the intensity of my last journal. The honesty of it shook me. When you keep a journal, you write only when you feel the most. Looking back through my journals, I wonder how I could have denied such obvious truths, as they were repeated throughout. Funny how we close our eyes to things when we lack the strength to deal with them.

Anyway, I am going to go buy a pretty journal and find a really good hiding spot for it (you can't write honestly if there's a chance it may be discovered). I am going to go to the coffeeshop around the corner at least twice a week...alone...to spend time on these assignments and to write in my journal. This is all I can promise myself at this time.
post #19 of 54
My daughter looks at me with her baby blue eyes. She holds my world in those eyes. She laughs and wrinkles her nose in humor and delight. She fills my world with her joy. She pouts and tearful angst slowly takes over her face whenever I say no, as though the very word has wounded her soul. She pierces my world with her cries. She crawls towards me and away from me with the same alacrity depending on her mood. She moves my world with her motion. My daughter has taught me to love in a way I never suspected was real, but the world she has made for me is more real than anything I have exprienced before. She is flesh of my flesh, blood of my bood; with her grandmother's hair and her father's nose and a countanence all her own. She was created out of my body and nourished from my breasts and yet it is she who creates my world and shatters it a hundred times a day. It is her beautiful presence that nourishes my soul. She is my daughter: my heart, my world.

Does anyone else find these time limits, well, limiting? It's good though, structure is good. It keeps me from babbling, kind of like now...............
post #20 of 54
I have been doing the assignments but there is no time lately to type and post as I am so slow and life is just crazy yet powerful and full of growth . I am going away to the desert in the am until late Sunday and once again I have run out of time to post. The board says it's shutting down until 12-05-04. I will be so sad without these assignments. I am finally inspired to write again. Maybe I can do it on my own now.

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