Nice! So happy to see more people getting the word out
Just a typo I saw here:
|The circumcision rate is about 57% depending on your are.
(change to area
I don't particularly care for this line:
|There is such an emphasis on being independent in our country; this decision would be a good thing to not be part of the flock on.
It just reads very awkward to me. Maybe change it to something more like "this decision is an appropriate one to leave in the hands of the individual when he is older." Or simply emphasise that it's not a parent's place to make such a decision for someone based on anything but medical need.
I would also, in the section about hygiene, consider adding a blurb about how EASY it is to care for an infant's intact penis. No retracting, no q-tip use, no gauze, or poop getting into the urethra, etc.