Looking for a favor, someone to read what I wrote

[jenni22]

I am writing a story, it is my first attempt, I know nothing about writing except from reading my whole life. What I'm looking for is some opinions, if it is at all interesting, or just plain boring! If it flows and makes sense. and just general tips on how I could make it better! I am looking for the good and bad! It is 1600 words so far, 5 pages, with lots of spaces. if you would like to help me out, let me know and I can pm or e-mail it to you! And I am definitely willing to return the favor anytime!

[Blu Razzberri]

I'll read it. You can PM it to me if MDC allows the space.

[jenni22]

Thanks, I will, it has gotten longer since I've had two naps to work on it today, but just read as much as you want!