Is the logo too much?

[Zadee]

I've created a breastfeeding portrait package and want to know if people think the logo is too much.

http://www.memoriesbystacie.com/?page_id=66

[fek&fuzz]

Your link just takes me to the page about the details of a shoot, there's no logo there.

[Zadee]

Ugg. I'll figure out that annoyance. Meanwhile, here's the image alone.

http://www.memoriesbystacie.com/wp-c...go_invert1.jpg

[fek&fuzz]

I like the text. The breast looks odd, and the nipple is a triangle so it doesn't really look like a nipple.

Can you do an image of a mom and baby silhouette?

[eepster]

That's a very sharp looking tip on that nipple.

[alsoSarah]

I'm not sure what you mean by "too much."

I do agree with all that fek&fuzz said.


alsoSarah

[arwenevenstar]

I love your photos in the gallery!! You have some talent!!

I agree with the others. The first thing that hit me was WOW! That'd take ya eye out! I'd soften the nipple too.

[Zadee]

Thanks, all. I'll rework it.

It's always going to appear near images so I don't think it needs much more than the words but they seemed so... plain.

[Mama Dragon]

I think it is...I personally love it, but there will be many women who want breastfeed portraits but are still shy or modest and the nipple is rather bold. I'd go for more subtle, something like the silhouette in the new international breastfeeding symbol.

[umami_mommy]

OUCH!



something more elegant might be nice.

[kokonutmama]

I didn't notice the nipple being sharp, what struck me odd was the angle of the whole breast shape. Thinking about it, it is kind of a tough thing to abstract "tastefully" and realistically. Maybe you could in some way use the shape of the kids' face while feeding? that sweet, comfortable upward gaze that runs through all of the beautiful pictures in the breastfeeding gallery on your site? They really are gorgeous, by the way.