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Old 08-01-2012, 10:01 AM - Thread Starter
 
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I drafted this yesterday and wanted to get some opinions from other professionals about it. not sure if i should reword some things or add others, leave others off... just wanted some comments and constructive criticism.... thanks!!

 

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Old 08-01-2012, 11:42 AM
 
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I really like it. To the point, but gives enough information if you have no idea what a doula is. 

 

Great work! thumb.gif Let us know how many hits you get from them. Where are you planning on giving them out?


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