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FWIW in your sample, I think start with "Last year" reads awkwardly. It does convey that this bit happened earlier, but it's not a very firm time marker. "Last year" could be any time from a day (if today is Jan 1!) to more than a year ago (if today is in December!). Could you at least nail the timing down to a season, ie, "Last summer" or whatever?
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