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Originally Posted by my2girlsmama
Thanks! I did it off the cuff last night here while nak with sick toddler in arms............
Originally Posted by BelovedK
Wow, I'm impressed
|The new winds creating passion,|
|The feel of the warmth of the summer-setting sun, saving one's face from chill|
|April, I loved that, it really used imagery to transport you to the scene, i felt,heard,tasted and smelled it.|
Originally Posted by pumpkinsmama
You really caught my attention with this phrase. It is the first time I remember seeing the wind described as passionate and it seems so apt!
I thought this sentence was distracting
because later on you say "I", it just makes me wonder if you chose that on purpose? Or why didn't you just say "saving my face from chill"?
I agree with BelovedK
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