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#1 of 4 Old 12-09-2006, 02:37 AM - Thread Starter
 
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So I've never posted here. I've never lurked here. In fact, I don't think I've ever clicked on this board before in my life, but I wrote a poem tonight. It's the first poem I've written in years, and I wanted to share it with someone, so I figured I'd share it here.

Mental Chess

I saw me asking for you -
but not really.
You declining.
Me.
Stumbling over bumps in the pavement
with elequent words and comments.
Comments on your actual thoughts;
Versus
your words.

Kerry, loving wife to Pete, mama to DD (14) DS1 (9) DS2 (3) & Expecting someone new Jan 2013

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Nice!

Doesn't it feel good to get back into something that you either intentionally gave up or just let fall by the wayside? I love to write but it's a rare occasion that I get to!

~Beth, mama to two amazing girls, ages 12 and 6~

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This is a good, sturdy peice that I really liked; however, your use of punctuation is a bit curious, though unique.

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#4 of 4 Old 01-06-2007, 12:58 AM - Thread Starter
 
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Yeah.. I'm odd with punctuation. Then I look at it and I can't see removing any, so I just left it?

Kerry, loving wife to Pete, mama to DD (14) DS1 (9) DS2 (3) & Expecting someone new Jan 2013

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