fanstory.com. There is a 5.95 a month fee to post and get criticism, but it is very constructive. I love it. And, you read and comment on others work as well. The good thing about the site is that it is not a love fest, the writers are really trying to help, but they are polite. I have a short story on there that I was able to polish up a lot. I need to get cracking and get another one up.