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#1 of 2 Old 04-02-2007, 05:09 PM - Thread Starter
 
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now and again i play around with writing explicit stories (ie erotica)

i'd like to find a place or person who can read them over and offer me technical critiques -- things like the grammar here is weak, you switched the tense of the verbs etc.

any suggestions?
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now and again i play around with writing explicit stories (ie erotica)

i'd like to find a place or person who can read them over and offer me technical critiques -- things like the grammar here is weak, you switched the tense of the verbs etc.

any suggestions?
You so can send them to me I have such a wild side- people on MDC have no idea :

I could even give you idea on where to submit them!

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