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#1 of 6 Old 04-05-2007, 10:08 PM - Thread Starter
 
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I've never posted over here but today I needed an outlet and wrote a poem for my DS who is due any time now. Just wanted to be able to share it. Thanks for reading


I saved it all
and with it
tended my garden of grief
with the love I received
with the watery laughter
that flows beneath

And out of it all you sprouted
from the most beautiful seed
among mighty towers and tumbling weeds
you
the one that only I can feed
became the rosy miracle
sown in my garden of grief
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Thank you so much for sharing that, baybemama. It is beautiful.
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Beautiful
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i really like the last two lines
thanks for sharing!

Mommy to a wonderfully passionate little one
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Thank you, I love the watery laughter that flows beneath.
Have a beautiful birth, one that can be described with the same words.
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Love it! Keep writing!
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