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#1 of 2 Old 06-10-2007, 03:55 AM - Thread Starter
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Hey...this is the first poem I've ever shown anyone but please be honest and say what you really think...I love writing and glad I've found this forum on MDC!

My Best Friend

My best friend
The one who's always there
The one who sees me in all my pain
The one who mocks me, makes me cringe in shame
My best friend
Holds me tight in a knot

My best friend
Loves me all the same
Twisted thoughts she lets flood my mind
Can't turn my head away, for the thoughts inside
My best friend
What a joke

My best friend
The irony of it all
When I see her face my indsides churn
Love, pure hate, sadness creeping in
I'm stuck with her, for the rest of my days
My sweet self

And she is to me
Everything I hate in me
And she could be
Everything I want to be
My best friend, my worst enemy
You are me
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