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Is your sister a professional illustrator? Most publishing companies will NOT accept mss with illustrations included--they match the story to the illustrator.
If you just finished, I would not submit this immediately. I would take it to writers' groups for critiques (NOT friends and family), sit on it for a few months and percolate, consider revisions, etc.