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#1 of 7 Old 01-15-2008, 06:15 PM - Thread Starter
 
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I especially love the roundedness of the bottom left corner of the a. However, you might consider including a few other vowels as it looks kind of lonely sitting there by itself. Perhaps an E to balance out the rounded edges of the "a"?
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Sorry Ladies! I accidentaly posted the wrong piece and when I went back to put the right one in, I couldn't find it!!! ARG!!!!!! Talk about frustrating.

Anyway, the piece I put in on accident was a little, um, dark. So I wasn't sure if I should leave it up, so "a" is what you got! Again, sorry!

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I especially love the roundedness of the bottom left corner of the a. However, you might consider including a few other vowels as it looks kind of lonely sitting there by itself. Perhaps an E to balance out the rounded edges of the "a"?
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Sorry, I couldn't resist.
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Don't worry- it was quite funny! But after I saw it I thought maybe I should explain myself.


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