Ok, #1, I read all the posts on the first page and was eager for more. I kept clicking 'next' and the first page kept loading as page #2, #3, etc. What's that about?! I was disappointed.Does my profile info read well? Does it help readers 'know' the blogger?
YesIs the content tight and professional?
Yes, I'm no expert but I thought it was very well written.Is the writing interesting to read?
Yes, especially from a Canadian perspective. Should the writing be strictly educational, or include personal posts to add some personality?
In this case, because it's linked with the magazine, I'd say it should lean more towards educational, but throw in some personal posts too!Is the content worth coming back for?
Yes, especially if you live in the area. I'm always happy to find interesting Canadian blogs.How can the blogger bring more traffic?
Who is your main audience? Is it promoted as a more local magazine? Or across Canada, around the world? To get things going locally, I'd mention local places of interest that people might search for (online). Link to other local websites.
What about spotlighting local businesses or people who are doing a great job or that could help others? That would bring their friends and family to your blog.How can the blogger generate more comments?
I think your blog has to be promoted more locally. Is it a new magazine? New online? I'm surprised your blog doesn't get more comments.