Thank you for the nice comments. I find it hard not to notice the errors in my own knitting, but I'm not sure that a non-knitter would notice them or even consider them errors. Due to how close I am to Christmas, I am going to go ahead and wrap the darn thing and stop second guessing myself.
I did start another entrelac scarf in Noro Silk Garden which has subtle color changes, and I really like how the subtle changes look much better. Friendtoall - if you have a yarn with color changes similar to Noro, you'll love how it turns out. I've also seen quite a few entrelac pieces done with Patons SWS that look great to me. Maybe it is partially due to them being someone else's FO though.
Anyway, I appreciate the encouragement. Getting wrapped tonight.
Jill, current Pugmama to 3, anxiously awaiting the arrival of our first two-legged baby July 1st.