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Here's a poem I wrote almost exactly three years ago, when I was 18 weeks pregnant with my son. I came across it in my journal and felt like it totally expressed how I feel right now, and I wanted to share it with all of you. I wrote it while sitting on the shore of Lake Superior on a particularly fine day, watching the power of the roaring waves, becoming aware of the changes in my body and soul, becoming a mother. It's one of my favorite places on earth. Enjoy!

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I'm struck today-
by the notion of my body,
the motion of my hips
rocking my steps into a rhythm
strange to me but somehow familiar,
quiet and old as the sand beneath me,
these stones
rocking my bones
these stones
into a life-giving mother
these stones of earth,
my girth
ever-widening, swelling,
the swelling of waves, curled and striking
these stones of the shore
this sibilant roar,
these rocks
earth and water
mixing in me-
mother
mixing in breath,
the wind groans
upon these stones
rocking the water
stirring the sand,
stilling my hand.
 

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You've made me terribly homesick. I grew up on Lake Superior (Duluth, MN) and am now landlocked in the desolate deep South...Yuck.

Lake Superior is an amazing body of water, always had a poetic effect on me!
 

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You've made me terribly homesick. I grew up on Lake Superior (Duluth, MN) and am now landlocked in the desolate deep South...Yuck.

Lake Superior is an amazing body of water, always had a poetic effect on me!

BlissP, If I could bottle up some of the essence of the big lake for you (or better yet, that lovely cool breeze that softens our summer here in Duluth), I'd send it on down to you! I went away, only to find that there was nothing like Lake Superior anywhere else...had to come back!
 
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